Human Dot Comp Crit

4: Craft of documentation, Good quality of prints, great use of cameras

3: Use of white or negative space, The red cups are distraction to the negative space; if there was more white space the dots could be more visible

5: Dots, Good creativity on what to use as dots, resourceful

4: Human element, The Human element is playful and creative

5: Theme and/or meaning, Our theme for the comp were of our own, each comp has and individual idea behind it

3: Group Process, We Could have been more organized and had the whole group with us for the pictures

White space/ Negative space, Fabrication:

The use of white space/negative space for most of the compositions was used well and creatively, but for one of the compositions if the white space was completely apart of the composition the dots could have been better, making the composition better as a whole. Choosing the negative space for the compositions grouped with the clothing gave the composition a wholeness feel.

Monologue Vids

Drawing Lines

Distinct Piece Of Music with Charcoal:

Distinct Piece of Music with Charcoal:

Distinct Piece of Music with Charcoal:

Folded Paper, Smoothed, Lines:

Crumbled Paper, Smoothed, Lines:

100 Parallel Lines with Two Hands  at the Same time:

 Attacking the Page:

100 Hundred Parallel Lines with Eyes Closed: 

Mood of Music with Charcoal:

Mood Of Music with Charcoal:

 Phrase/Thought Filled the Page: All Day Every Day

My Name 100 Times, Tray

Lines in Nature

Story Line

"You know you're just jaywalked, right?"
"Nuh-huh, I just crossed the street."
"The light was red and you walked through the middle of the street, the cross walk is over here!"
"Yea well there aren't any cops to arrest me for jaywalking."
"Ha, so you did jaywalk?"
"Wait a minute jaywalking means not looking before you cross the street, I looked."
"You're gonna argue with me, a CJ (Criminal Justice) major about the law?"
"I'm not argruing with you just proving my point, which is that I'm right."
"You're such a jerk."
"Sometimes."
"What if that car didn't stop?"
"The car would have stopped, I'm a pedestrian, I had the right of way."
"You're a pedestrain crossing the middle of the street!"
"See you just proved my point that I safely crossed the street."
"Your point?"
"Yea that I crossed the street not jaywalked like you said."
"Dealing with you is going to make me late for class."
"I thought you said we were heading to lunch, isn't that why we are walking to your car?"
"Oh, see I'm not even focused"
"Where are we going for lunch anyway?"
"Police Station, go to turn in somebody, I mean stuff"
"Hahahaha, very funny really where's lunch going to be at today?"
"I don't know any place you want to go?
"Olive Garden, haven't been there in a while"
"Hmmmmm bread sticks."

Human Comp of Dots..

White/ Negative Space in nature