Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Human Dot Comp Crit

4: Craft of documentation, Good quality of prints, great use of cameras

3: Use of white or negative space, The red cups are distraction to the negative space; if there was more white space the dots could be more visible

5: Dots, Good creativity on what to use as dots, resourceful

4: Human element, The Human element is playful and creative

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: Theme and/or meaning, Our theme for the comp were of our own, each comp has and individual idea behind it

3: Group Process, We Could have been more organized and had the whole group with us for the pictures


White space/ Negative space, Fabrication:
The use of white space/negative space for most of the compositions was used well and creatively, but for one of the compositions if the white space was completely apart of the composition the dots could have been better, making the composition better as a whole. Choosing the negative space for the compositions grouped with the clothing gave the composition a wholeness feel.

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